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Blacier

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So, here's my try at a Blacier art piece... I guess its ok? Well, I was inspired by RealTense 's Blacier drawings. :P Here's a story thing:

*BEFORE TOP, BECAUSE... SAD REASONS... :( *

Blaze: "Isn't this kingdom just beautiful? Not as beautiful as me!"
Glacier: "Yes, the kingdom isn't as beautiful as you, Blaze..."
Blaze: "I know, that's what everyone thinks!"
Glacier: "Yes, yes, of course."
Blaze: "Ooh! Look at the bright cactus, I WANNA HUG IT!"
Glacier: "BLAZE, DON'T, it'll hurt you."
Blaze: "Ohhh, yeeeah...!"
Blaze: "OOO A CAMEL!"
Glacier: "Do you want me to catch it for you?"
Blaze: "Yes, please!"
Glacier: "Alright, *Glacier catches it* here."
Blaze: "Thank you!"

There was the horrible short story that goes with the drawing... XD
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

You did a decent job with the coloring and shading. You colored perfectly inside the lines and didn't ruin your lineart. I also really like that purple color on glacier. You payed attention to detail and added all the things the dragon had.

Now I'm gonna start being critical.
The weakest point of your art is probably purportions. (I cant spell) The lines were also a bit...
errr squigly-ish? but I think it's because you don't have a drawing tablet.
The part that honestly bothers me the most is that blaze's legs are taller than her body hight. Also, I think blaze is supposed to be sand-colored and not brown like a mudwing.